No I don't like it... I LOVE it and I'm left speechless and drooling over the pure perfection that is this picture seriously... I love how you can capture the atmosphere in the picture so well, making me feel like I am standing right there (like a closet voyeur that I am XDDDDD)... I love your works so much <3
-the blond guy's knee is as big as the other guy's boob, thus giving the idea that he is not resting his feet on the other guy's shoulder's. Also there is no angle in the legs to give the feeling that they come from the blond guys body. As they are now it seems like a third person just dived in the bath tub with them. (because they give the feeling that they make a 90degree angle with the tub)
-black hair guy's left arm is bigger than the right also due to wrong perpective of the image.
Teddy is much taller so it's kind of amusing seeing his feet stretch out much farther and Billy's which just rest on Teddy's shoulder. It's a really relaxing image. Makes me want to have a bath as well